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This is for an art book project me and some friends are talking about. I was gonna wait to get started on this, but a sketch group I'm in had a similar theme for a sketch due tonight, so I figured I may as well know out the sketch.
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<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/>I love the unique character designs and the detail and care you put into the facial structure and outfit details. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/>The amount of movement is great; it's hard to tell a little since it's sketch but what I can make out has a nice flow. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/>Nice job with line weight variation on the characters.Things to consider:
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="567" title="Bullet; Orange"/>The perspective is off in a few places. The skyline in the background should match the direction of the rest of the picture, it looks odd and out of place. I think you're showing too much of the bottom of the guys foot; I notice that he's supposed to be higher than the viewing angle but it he doesn't seem high enough for us to see the bottom of his shoe. Overall this is a lovely sketch, definitely worth polishing up, and I hope this helps!